Bumble#daily prompt #season 3#attempt 7
Like Bumble bee
We keep on rumbling
From one desire to other
Sucking enjoying their
Temporary nectar
Only to learn the truth
At the end
Freedom from desires
Is real nectar
That we never tried to collect
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A very fine metaphor.
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Thank You!
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Very nice
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Thank You
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What a beautiful message given
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Thank You!
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Welcome 😊
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Wise words. Very beautiful!
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Thank You!!
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Trying a lot..but I think it is difficult to overcome desires at such a young age…especially sexual desires which are soo powerful..
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Profound wisdom!
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Thank You Shaloo!
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Great analogy and wise words flowing from your pen dear. A great take on the prompt 🙂
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Thank You Radhika!
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How true! “Just one more” is what we continuously want. Only when we died to our desires that the death sets us free! Beautifully written, Meenakshi!
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Thank You so much Miriam!!
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You’re welcome, Meenakshi! Did I understand this time? I’m curious about the inspiration before writers’ poems. We read Emily Dickinson yesterday. All we could do is to reflect on what we think. We didn’t know the inspiration behind the poems!
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Yes! You perfectly understood it to the point. Desires are like web. Freedom from them could only make us free!
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You have the perfect words to articulate it poetically!
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☺😍
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🙂
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I’ll read your poem tomorrow. Good night!
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Good night Miriam!
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Good afternoon, Meenakshi!
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Superb, Meenakshi..
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Thank You Deepika!
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Said correctly . Beautiful indeed.
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Thanks Nisthur
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😊
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