When you think about
Some thing all the time
And yet don’t know
Should I or shouldn’t I?
When there is a tug of war
Between
Feelings of heart and
Confusions of mind!
What to do and
Where to go?
At such times
You keep on asking
Right or wrong?
But tell me one thing
Who made the rules?
This is wrong and
That is right?
How can we decide?
That which is wrong for you
For me it could be right!
Every truth has two sides
Neither you are God
Nor am I!
Then who will decide?
Think out of the box
The answer is so clear
Let’s live by our heart
And until we don’t harm
Feelings of others
And do not commit crime
All is alright
Let us live our own life
Allowing every one decide
Their own wrong or right
Freely and truly!
When we are free
To make our own choice!
Only then one can decide
What to choose between
Feelings of heart or
Confusions of mind!
Very inspiring and beautiful
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Thank You!
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I loved the idea of this poem.
There’s a quote that says let a person be himself and see the magic! They’ll be 10 times more productive. You beautifully portrayed this. Each of us are unique and different.
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Thank You so much Kavita! Love this quote! And yes each of us is different and unique and so is our way to deal with our life! That’s why I love this quote too-” live and let others live”
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Jio aur jeene do π
Sab log yeh chiz Sikh jae then this world will be a paradise β€
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True!!!
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Lovely.
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Thank You!
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Yes you are right..clearly expressed..before doing something right or wrong it is quite essential that we should think from the other side too, that is the side of the person whom we are doing or saying something to..so we dont have to regret for something wrong we did..
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Chitra In my opinion there is no such thing as right or wrong…it all depends on our perspective to look towards a situation! Thanks for stopping by!
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You are welcome!
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Meenaskhi Sethi you make how I struggle with my decisions, choices
& the confusion in my mind sound beautiful.
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Thank You so much! We all struggle with these confusions before making decisions…but only we have to decide what to choose!
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Feelings of the heart or confusion of the mind…….oh! How true ……there is always a tussle between the two and sometimes it is an herculean task to decide who we heed to.
Beautiful Meenakshi!!
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Thank You Radhika! And coming out of this herculean is what we actually live and call life! π
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Yes…..very true!
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And i think you meant something else in your poem apart from what i said..!
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Yes I actually meant something else π
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Anyway your post is nice..keep on writing!
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Thank You Chitra!
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Reminds me of “to be or not to beβ
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Thank You! Very appropriate!
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Couldn’t help it that’s all I remember
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very realistic and true one. that comes directly from the beneath of the heart. thank u Meenkshi Pati ……..keep writing …. I love it
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Thank You!
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Well said! jc
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Quite an interesting way to look at it. I feel like you’ve opened my mind in some way.
Great poetry. π
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Thanks a lot! I’m glad if my words did that! π
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Only choices made lead to clarity …of what is right from wrong only to oneself …let the heart lead and see where it lands, the mind will be smarter next time around…
Very beautiful composition!
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Thank You so much! Very beautiful compliment π
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Very beautiful and real
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Thank You! π
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful poem, its not easy to sync mind with heart so yes thinking out of box leaving behind all confusion working on instinct is best solution π
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Thank You! Sometimes it is!
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Amazing i loved it.
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Thanks!
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