You were my life’s
Favourite season!
You stepped in it
For a beautiful reason!
You were weaved by god
In fabric of my life!
You were my light and
An inspirational guide!
You showed me the way
And taught me to rise!
But the saddest part of
All these lines!
Is- ‘You were’!
How I wish I could rewrite
These couple of years!
Using ‘are’ instead of
This killing ‘were’!
#It Kills#
Wings Of Poetry 
It is so sad..it pierces thru my heart…
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It is…
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Thank you for stopping by and follow… your poems are so touching and inspiring😃
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Thank you! ☺
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‘We’ replaced by an ‘a’ in were makes a world of difference. Very profound Meenakshi 👌
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Thanks Radhika! Sometimes these little alterations change the whole world for us…
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Very true!
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there is a ‘were’ behind every ‘are’..
we cannt change it.
excellent poem..
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Thank you Akhila! So true!!
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Wow.. Meenakshi, each and every word is perfectly written by you. Thank you for posting it. 😃
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Thank You Sumit for liking it 🙂
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Beautfiully written! Loved it 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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☺️👍
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The pain of the past tense in a relationship, I can feel it.
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Appreciate your concern! Thanks for understanding!!
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Such a serene and Beautiful poem you have wrote .
And very painful.
I am touched.
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This pain could only be eased diverting it into words…though beautiful memories will always warm the heart!
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Yes agreed, talking to you is really been great experience.
I found so close, after reading your poems and interacting through comments.
It’s lovely.
You write so well. Yes true writing is healing therapy can ease pain and help accepting the reality as well.
Glad connecting.
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My pleasure! Thanks for your kind words!!
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😊😊
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A very touching piece
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Thanks you liked it!
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Yes I did like it
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Pain and true feelings reach from one heart to another quickly!!
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true
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Oh – the last line 😦
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Yes it still hurts…
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[hugs]
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Thanks!
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Wow. So lyrical and rhyming expressions. I loved it.❤
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Thank you Sanskriti 💖
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Nice one Meenakshi Sethi ji.
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Just Meenakhi will do 🙂
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so beautifully drafted 🙂
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Thanks dear! ❤
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Ultimately heart wrenching!!
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my mind speculates about the story behind this, and some of your other poems. But it would not help me to know! as they are your stories… but I can let your poems resonate with my stories, of course. Thanks for appreciating my site by your ‘follow’ Meenakshi. I will repay the compliment and look forward to reading more of your work, Tony
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Hi Tony! We all have stories, we all have scars. That is what keeps life flowing. We poets and writers are sensitive and can connect easily with each other’s stories! Thank you for visiting. I will read your work soon! Have a great day!
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