Desire#Daily Prompt#Attempt 103#Tanka 1
Arising desire
creating ripples in heart
making soul vibrate
till attain desire’s command
greedy commands never stop
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Seriously, Greed never stops for some!
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And make its victims dance on its tune
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but all commands or desires….may not be due to the greed….
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Yea, that’s true…all are not due to greed but greed of fulfilling all desires erode our peace
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that’s true….regards…
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Absolutely true and such powerful words can come from a person who has realized who he is. Desire for desirelessness in order to know who u really r
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Thank You Kamal! Only saints and great people like Rumi can open our eyes with such powerful words!
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Yes Meenakshi absolutely and that is the secret of their being enlightened souls. I love Rumi and have read his books too and would love to go and do their dance which is an offering to God.
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Same here Kamal! I’m also a big fan of Rumi!
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Great Meenakshi
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Tanka…great writing…nothing more to say…your writing always make me loss at words….
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Thank You Sangbad! Credit goes to you and Theresa for motivating me to attempt for these new forms! 🙂
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a shied smiley…Di I also credited for you s’thing…
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Agree
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Thank You Girija
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Hey,I have nominated you for an award.Please check:
https://multitudeofmythoughts.wordpress.com/2017/03/05/one-lovely-blog-award/
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Thank You so much Shivangi! And congrats you for yours too! 🙂
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Welcome!:-)
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Nice lines.maybe desire is the main reason for all sufferings.
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Yes, it is! Thank You so much for visiting 🙂
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Heart when tested gets stronger it’s the mind that never forgets
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Great Work!
can you check out mine?
https://alfatoon.wordpress.com/2017/04/12/i-wonna-tell-you/?frame-nonce=2858d350c7
thank you!
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Thank You! Yea for sure!
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Beautifully written!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!!
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Thank You!!
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You are most welcome!
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Rumi! ❤❤
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Yes I too love Rumi’s quotes!!
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