Quicken#Daily Prompt#Attempt 100
Heart beatQuicken
Palms turns wet
With cold sweat
Nerves become tense
Legs go weak like jelly
Refuse to support
The body weight
Clouds of tears
Ready to explode
Their heavy load
Weak smile fails
To hide this all
As time runs fast
And we reach close
To bid goodbye
To other part of our heart
Has this happened ever
With you all?
Copyright © 2017 All rights Reserved Wings Of Poetry, Meenakshi Sethi
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The pangs of separation are felt, as you rightly said, at airports and railway stations, as one bids goodbye to loved ones, and how deeply it pains, and hat is when we feel the existence of loving hearts…
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So true Sunith! I just hate these goodbyes but at the same time these are the moments which reveal to us too that how much valuable is the person whom we are bidding goodbye…
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Very true Meenakshi, it is when you know the importance of that person.
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A Farewell Song–title from me for your poem…loved it…
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Thank You so much Sangbad! Loved this title 💖
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not to mention
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It is always difficult to bid good bye to a loved one! This feeling conveyed by your poem reaches the heart, Meenakshi!
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Thank You so much Radhika 💖
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I loved your poem!The quote you have used is very true!
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Thank You Ramya!
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Congratulations….on the brink of a century, Poetry, coming from deep inside heart and with peaking emotions, is difficult to produce with daily prompts.
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Thank You so much sir! I’m soon going to close this just waiting for completion of 101 prompt!
I’m feeling as if I’m losing my way with words now so will take a break for sometime and will post just random poems!
I’m truly humble for your encouraging words! Thanks ones again! ☺
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chilling….
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Thanks!
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You speak for what your heart and my heart feel. Touching poem!
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Thank You Miriam! 💖
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You’re welcome, Meenakshi! *°• ♥ •°*
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Loved your poem👍🏻
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Thank You Mayank!
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Goodbyes are always disheartening.. But life must go on as they say..
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Yep that too with high spirits 🙂
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