Specific#Daily Prompt#Attempt 48
With sun gone
Earth is never lost in darkness
Infact it is tempted
To lit by Infinite small star bulbs
Giving it a sensuous look!
With gone wind
Trees never stop their dance
Infact they stay calm in meditation
With music of chirping birds
And recharge themselves!
With gone years
We never stop living
But cherish the memories
Of gone days and move ahead
To write some new stories!
With gone water
Rivers never dried up
They replenish themselves
And keep flowing
Spreading life everywhere!
Then why with someone
Specific gone
We stop living
As if our heart
Is missing its part!
So I want to tell you
O My dear heart!
With someone specifc gone
Don’t stop living
As life is too short
To be lost in grieving!
With gone years we never stop living”… so true Meenakshi! Love your style of writing …
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Thank you Divya π
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A beautiful poem, urging us to keep moving. Great post! π
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Thank You Sakshi! Stagnation is death so keep moving βΊ
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True that!! π
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Guess most of us here are all subjected to humming “let’s breakup o meri Jaan”.. Kidding.. Amazingly written. I never believed when teachers used to say “so the poet feeling is..” in my childhood, but I must admit I reread this poem. Tbh WP created some urge in me not to scroll down a post with the length and like esp in a poem post ππ
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Thank You Jai! And very true, even in my school days I used to think exactly what goes inside a poet’s mind? How they create these poems.
Thanks for the reread βΊβΊ
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Beautiful and positive.
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Thank You Puneet!
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To keep flowing with focus ahead is indeed how the journey is …in spite of the tugs at heart, keep flowing and finding joy. Very beautiful poem!
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Thank You Pragal! My poem looks more beautiful to me after reading your views! I’m a big fan of your work. Very deep and just beautiful π
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Thank you very much for the smile you just gave me π Feeling is mutual.
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I loved your picture with brave wings she flies. You have said it so beautifully Meenakshi and when nature is so beautiful and never gets hurt and does what it has to do, why then we don’t move ahead if someone has broken our hearts. Loved this stanza of yours. Great π poem.
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Thank you Kamal! Yes live life with smiles and face bravely whatever comes in way π
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Yes so true cause what is life if it is not learnt to be lived bravely and with great joy and smiles.
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A stage comes in life that memories are all that remain, when you live only in the world of memories and the reality before you ceases to interest you. That is the time when you feel life is too long and yearn for the curtain to come down ending the show.
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Very true! Thanks for reading and valuable insight!
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Ya..we just need to go on, finding pleasures in every little moments of life
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Yepp π
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Beautiful poem Meenakshi π
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Thank You Priya! π
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Beautiful and food for thought. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank You Debbie π
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