Maddening#Daily Prompt#Attempt 28
My thoughts cry,
As they miss someone
My life cry,
As it is not satisfied,
My days cry, behind
Fake smiles,
My nights cry,
To fight loneliness,
My heart cries,
It is stabbed many times,
My soul cries,
It wants freedom
From this life,
All cries but my eyes
They protest…
To accept the request of
These unshed Maddening tears
Pleading to get freedom
And flee away…
From this cage of eyes!
Very nice, beautifully expressed.
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Thank You!
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank You for the reblog!
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Well written Meenakshi. Nice lines:-)
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Thank You Priya! 🙂
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An incredible and grand expression of emotions. I am speechless.
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Thank You so much Vishal!
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“cage of eyes” – wonderful phrase, Meenakshi! 🙂
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Thank You Theresa! 🙂
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Oh what a poem Meenakshi, so poignant and agree wholeheartedly with these lines. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌Great.
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Thank You Kamal! 🙏🙏🙏 🙂
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Always welcome dear
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I like it and I love the picture also..
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Thank You! 🙂
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Is this for the late J.Jayalalitha by any chance? It suits her well😶
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After her demise I learnt about her life and struggles and I must say being Jayalalitha is not easy at all… From Jayalalitha to Amma…I appreciate her courage. And the way she shine even her inner world was as lonely as her eyes used to speak.
This was not for her but many women in our society leads a life this way…lonely in crowd!
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Heartbreaking indeed…
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I will not say that I liked this but the one who goes through it, will be compelled to read this and seek him or herself in the words. 🙂
Everything will be Okay.
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But soon I realised
What I miss is me
That was the vantage point
When I learned the art
Of selfishness
And found my lost being
The smile renewed
The shine of eyes
Replenished
I have me
I don’t miss myself
Anymore.
Loved your piece, just felt like adding a little up to your story.
Cheers!!
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And you completed it perfectly making it more beautiful!! Loved your version💖 Thank you so much!! 🙂
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Much love and hug. Glad you liked it!!
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Beautiful and full of feeling!
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Thank You Pragal! 🙂
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Tears all around , should I cry too …
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No no not at all, we have to avoid flood…you keep on smiling friend 🙂
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Hahaha that’s very funny…flood in winter… Unbearable lol…
So smiling is better option.
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Yes! By all means! Smiling is always best 🙂
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😊😊
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