Temporary feelings
Flickering thoughts
Perishable bodies
Crazy heart
All are nothing
Just soul’s way
Of experiencing
Its vivid journeys
Using the cloak
Of this body
Just as outer covering
So that it could be changed
If get weary and dusty!
Wow!π
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Thank You!! π
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As always your poems are a class apart Meenakshi. π
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Thank You Radhika!! π
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Always a pleasureπ
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Vividly written.
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Thank You!!
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Amazing!!
Deep meaning in just a few words β€
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Thank You Kavita!!
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Welcome π
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The soul unveiled in all its forms, Meenakshi and such a soothing read.
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Thank You so much Vishal!
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Wow! Very deep and beautiful …I love this and all your poems!
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Thank You so much!! I appreciate your love for my poems! π
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cheers to the heart & soul! nice poem..
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Thank You so much!!
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Soul-touching, Meenakshi!
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Thank You!
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polish the cloak;
but once, in a while,
let breathe the human inside,
the soul which, within resides,
let live, every once,
while you polish;
your conscience.
WoW!! beautiful and profound……..loved it!! π π
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Thank you for adding a new meaning to it! You made it more beautiful: )
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my pleasure…….glad you liked it! π π
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soul changing its weary body….do you believe that a soul move from one body to another..
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Akhila, Yes I do believe that our journey or soul’s journey is not limited to just one birth…soul keep on coming on this earth till we learn our lessons and reach salvation!
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The first blog I saw that’s worth scrolling down to depths:)
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Thank You so much Akshita! That’s a very big compliment: )
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Pleasure is all mine indeed π
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Wow Meenakshi another piece of superb poem. Loved it, the untarnished soul. πππππ
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Thank You Kamal! π
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You are always welcome Meenakshi. Have a nice day.
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Lovely
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Thank You!
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βΊ
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It’s so powerful for us to reflect on!
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Great way to compliment, Thanks!
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Lovely – its compiled beautifully! π
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Thank You So Much!! π
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You’re welcome!
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U said so much in so less words… still in awe!! Good one ….π
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Thank You! π
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