Overwhelming#Daily Prompt#Attempt 75
All senses lost
Leaving us vulnerable
Overwhelming with emotions
Light of spirituality
Could help us sail out
From this whirlpool
Back to rational ground
Where else could we proceed
In these times of need
Only he is real mate
Who never turns his back
When we call out loud!
His divine grace is the place
Where our thirsty heart
Could finally find solace
In his loving embrace!
Only He is real mate.. that is so true.. beautiful peom..
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Thank You!
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beautiful poem Ma’am…it’s insightful and thought provoking…
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Thank You Sangbad!
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not to mention ma’am…
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Just what I needed today…overwhelming is what I would describe my life right now. Beautiful poem ❤ I also wanted to try my hand at poetry and posted a poem recently on my blog. I would love to get your opinion if I'm any good 🙂
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Thank you so much! Sure going to read it!
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Excellent! Well done.
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Thank You so much!
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A divinely powerful poem that empowers us:)
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Thank You!
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We the readers are overwhelmed by your free flow and brillaint choice of words Meenakshi…a great piece as always!
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Thank You so much Sunita! From past one week I’m almost clueless and not in a state to write properly due to some serious health issues of my brother and my daughter pointed out about decreasing level of my writing!
But seriously thanks a lot for your encouraging words… That’s what I need at this time! 💖
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Oh…wishing a speedy recovery to your brother, will definitely keep him in my prayers and I am sure he is going to come out of it soon and be back on his feet.
Honestly, this one was easily one of your best, probably, the pain and anguish in one’s heart results in more flow of words.
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Thank You so much Sunita! May be like blessing in disguise!!
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Ooh! I love the text overlay on the photo. It really makes a nice impression. Great, Meenakshi!
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Thank You Theresa! That was my original writing style, when I started writing on WP. Then somewhere forgot about it! 🙂
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Ah! That happens to me. I’m glad to hear it! really enjoyed this post. 🙂
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