Crossing#Daily Prompt#Attempt 45
Stop Crossing my dreams
And thoughts
I’m trying to get over
This part
My life wants to rest
In peace
The flames of pain need
To be ceased
I’m trying to smooth
All the crease
Of crumbled heart
After your flee
My new love is
My solitude
I’m learning to accept
All its rules
Crossing of memories
Work as fuel
And keep burning
My love for you
Breaking every law
Of solitude
So stop crossing my dreams
And thoughts
I’m trying to get over
This part…
Strong poem! Female power?
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Yes strong, unbent female power!
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The sadness comes through though, Meenakshi.
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Reblogged this on Sacred Touches.
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Thanks for the reblog!
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My pleasure❣️😊
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This is quite lovely! 🙂 ❤
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Thanks for the read! ❤
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You’re so welcome😊❤️
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beautifully written….softly presented….
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Thank You!!
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Lovely yet powerful.
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Thanks! ❤
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“My new love is my solitude” – very nice!
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Thanks Theresa! 💖
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Beautiful.. I felt every word..
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Thank You!! 💖
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As usual, the post is lovely. I agree with TheresaBarker. The line “My new love is My solitude”, is brilliant.
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂
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The pleasure is mine. 😃
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Lovely, gentle, beautiful, powerful!
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Thank You! 💖💕
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Resplendent! !!
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Thank You Kiran!!
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Good night Meenakshi Di
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Good night sweet girl 💖💕
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Reblogged this on WENEZIA™ – Weidens neue Mitte!.
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Thanks for the reblog!
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Very powerful, Meenakshi.
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Thank You Deepika!!
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A crossing we all get through
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Very true!
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The crossing can be quite sad at times, and it has crossed over to the readers so well🙂
A class apart Meenakshi, as always 💙
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Thank You Radhika! 💖💕
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Lovely poem on Crossing and it can really hurt sometimes when we do not know what it is to cross over but brood over lost love and you have written it so well with an apt pic too. Great poem Meenakshi.
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Thank You dear! You are generous 💖
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Welcome always Meenakshi u wrote so well.
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I love your poem! It really gets to the heart of the messiness of human relationships.
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Thank You Roland! Heart and its ways… 🙂
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Ma’am stumbled on this and like this….reblogging this
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Of course you can! Thanks!
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not to mention
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Reblogged this on Thoughts of Words.
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