Gone#Daily Prompt#Attempt 44
Sun wrapped its instruments
To end the day
And with rays Gone
The director of creation
Ordered to pack for the day
And the entire scene changed
The night staff of the sky
Met the tired staff of the day
For a while
With a warm hello and quick bye
Day and night staff exchanged
Their positions
The entire sky changed its costume
From golden to light blue
And now it is wearing black
With studded stars
The bright yellow of sun
Has been replaced
With half smiling curve of moon
Till the day breaks
Once again!
Image courtesy: Pinterest
Love “the direction of creation” and the entire poem! Thank you for sharing your gifts!
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Thank You Rick!
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you 🙂
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Inspirational❤Love it
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
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Amazingly soothing poetry. The flow of your poetry and the play of colours represents the fluidity of nature and everything with time. Loved it!!
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Thank You so much for your gentle words! 🙂
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You deserve it
Much love 😍
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Agree💖
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Thanks a lot to you both! 🙂
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Truly poetic.. Like reading from a lesson in class books.. Well written 🙂
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Thank You Jai! 🙂
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What a lovely line to describe dusk-“With a warm hello and quick bye”. Enjoyed the poem.
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Much thanks! 🙂
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Pleasure 😃
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Going, going… gone! That’s me, going gaga over this poem! and the artwork!
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Haha…Thank you! 🙂
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‘The entire sky changed its costume.’ Just so beautiful.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Enjoyed the drama of nature unfold. Excellent direction of words Meenakshi <3!
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Thank You Radhika 💖
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Meenakshi, it’s a beautiful costume change…
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Thank You Akhila 😍
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