If moments start falling
From sky
Instead of rain
Will it bring smile
Or will it bring pain
Moments from the past
With a thundering blast
Some beautiful moments
And ugly ones too
Some from our childhood and
From silly young times too
Some that brought us smile
And those which made us cry
Also moments from those times
When we were full of hopes
And moments of failure
From where we strongly rose
How would you feel
Bathing in this downpour
Meeting all those loved ones
Who are with you no more
Would you savour those times
Or will you feel low?
Which moment would you grab
Which one will you let go…
The moments of love
The moments of pain
How emotional it would be
If moments start falling
From the sky, instead of rain!
Wow, this was a beautiful, truly lovely and well-written poem. π
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I just can’t stop imagining if moments actually fell from the sky!
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Me too π
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Thank you so much Aditi! π
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Thought-provoking poem, Meenakshi. Very lovely. β₯
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Thank you Isabella! You are so generous! π
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You have an amazing talent, dear Meenakshi. Your poetry comes from your heart and touches the hearts of others. Bless you. β₯
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Love you Isabella! I wish our hearts stay connected! π
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Our hearts are always connected for we are all One. β₯
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So true!
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What a lovely thought, a moment shower. A ver thought provoking and lovely poem π
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Moment Shower! Thats even a better name for this poem π Thank you Liza for stopping by!
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Your very welcome π
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Love this. Wonderful post βΊ
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Thank You Alaska! π
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A gorgeous poem, a wonderful thoughtful question. What would happen if we rained memories? Beautiful blog you have here. Thanks for following mine!
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Thank You so much and loved your too π
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Such an amazing idea!
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Another Version of Rain! TBH i dont wish to relive the moments, be it happy or sad, it should be cherished and make nostalgia grab us π
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Thank you for stopping by reading and give it a new meaning! π
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I try to keep my promises (most of the times ) and am loving it.. will go through them all π
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That’s great! Will love to see you visiting my blog reading it and will wait to know what you think about my poems! π
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Deal π
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What a lovely concept and imaginative visual you have placed before us!
Oh look; it’s raining thoughts! Hahaaaa… π
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Haha… Thank you Carolyn! That’s what we poets and writers do all the time, downpour of thoughts π
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Indeed ’tis true, Meenakshi… π
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Such a beautiful poem. It took back to my moments of life ……guess I’ll have a mixed shower of moments falling π
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Thank you Radhika! While writing I too felt the same π
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moments rain.. it’s a different thought.. hats off to your imagination..
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Thank You Akhila! You are always generous in your comments π
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my pleasure meenakshi.. indeed it was a good read
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I would savour this moment! inspiring words ::)
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Thank you Daisy! Let’s have a sip from the cup of heartfelt moments π
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Sounds like a great idea π
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This is brilliant! now, I would grab every moment and cherish them…every moment counts π
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Yes so very true! Every moment counts!! Thanks a lot! π
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You’re welcome! π
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The art of beauty!
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Thank You!
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I enjoyed this very much. You write beautifully! Smiles, Robin
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Thank You for your compliment! π
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So nice Meenakshi ji.
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Thank You Sagar!
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Welcome Meenakshi ji.
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Very nice done. Everyone wishes they could go back in time. But if given the option, would we?
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Thanks! Yea you are right! That’s the question we should ask ourselves!
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being personal…what would you choose?
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I would love to relive some of my memorable moments…
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very brave π
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So lovely :* π
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Thank you! π
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Wow… such a lovely thought.. and I loved how you put it all together! Beautiful poetry! π
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I’m greatful you liked it! Thank you so much! π
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Very beautifully written. And such a nice theme.
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Glad you liked it! π
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SUch a unqiue theme it is.
Truly commendable, Once a lifetime there must be such downpours π
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Thank You π Yes it should be…imagine if it turns out to be real, what will happen π
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Wonderful!
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Thank You!
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