Abide#Daily Prompt#Attempt 22
In some skies in some world
We are together with each other
In liminal space between
Death and birth
Instead of these perishing bodies
We just need thoughts to connect
We are together there with each other-
Without conditions
Without botheration
Without guilt or shame
Without judgements
We Abide there by divine code!
Wings Of Poetry 
Divine verses that are profound.
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Thank You!
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Each line touching, deep …that space where all there is is divine!
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Thank You Pragal!
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So I am here to praise you for your poems are you ready ?😊
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Haha! Welcome here! And please not just praises and nyc words. I would love to hear the truth….like a true critic.
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I am very poor in criticism. I really don’t know how to be critic… But I will not mind if some can teach me here…?😊
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Lol! Then say what comes in your mind after reading it….just be honest! That’s it 🙂
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This is simply Beautiful…just divine…
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Thank You! Yea I guess it is. But as I’m trying picking up prompt and use it in my poems daily, I was doubtful if writing daily can effect the quality?
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It’s simply amazing…with practice things are better I believe….
Do you want me to move to your next poem…?😊
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Yea sure go on…I will join you later! 🙂
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Ok….
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Yes for sure we all will meet in the in between somewhere or sometime. Great poem Meenakshi. Every line has got a beautiful pun in it.👍👍👍👍👍
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Thank You Kamal! Yes I’m sure there is some place where we meet those whom we can’t meet here on earth…
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Yes why not first of all can I tell u a small secret nobody has ever lived nor died the way our God wants we r all living a dream in an illusionary life.
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New insight! 👍 Thanks for sharing!
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Welcome dear Meenakshi.
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excellent lines, M!
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