Sometimes when I miss you, I miss having your grave to go,
To sit there for hours and talk my heart to you,
To light a candle and present some flowers near your gravestone,
It could have given me some peace, maybe but,
It is not possible,
Then I feel you are all around me,
Immersed in Ganges your ashes are part of that water,
That keeps cycling and has touched every partical in atmosphere,
You are all around me now, In the blue of the sky,
In serenity of rivers, even in oceans,
In the air that touch my skin and heart within,
In the snow peaked mountains or a part of desert’s sand,
And being an immortal soul somewhere above in heaven,
Looking down and smiling at me,
You are with me till eternity,
And after feeling your presence all around,
I no longer long for visiting you in graveyard,
To feel your presence while you are lying under the ground.
Ā© 2019 Meenakshi Sethi, wings of poetry
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Oh my! this is so heartfelt. The loss of a dear one is hard and the way you wrote his presence around you is breathtaking
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True Shantanu…loss of a dear one is a pain that keep nagging. When we try to understand the truth behind birth and death some calm come but still, till we are in this body it hurts.
Thank you for reading and understanding
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Absolutely – I lost of dad 18 years back and I can relate to your words
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Deep and Intense.
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Thank You!
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Sometimes the only solace in missing is feeling the presence of missed one around you ad to think that you might be sharing the same universe with them.
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That’s true, only this way we can keep our loved ones near us even after they merge in Universe.
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True ⤠take care dear : )
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Awesome and to feel Him everywhere is so beautiful, Meenakshi. The depth of your poetic words are splendid.
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Thank You Kamal! This is how I feel sometimes. His presence felt by heart though sense organs can’t perceive him.
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Yes of course and I can so agree with how you must be feeling, Meenakshi. It is a good way of writing poems to your Brother. He is always there with you all. Welcome dear.
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While we cannot get over the loss of a loved one, feeling his presence in all things is the right way to move on. Your deep emotions are brought out so deeply by your words Meenakshi.
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Thank You Radhika! That’s how I feel sometimes. His presence around me. Getting over loss of younger ones is not that easy, though pain subsides a little with time.
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A heart felt poem Meenakshi. I was missing your posts and often thinking about the emotions depicted in your poems and leaving me blank over the thought that loss can ever be healed.
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Hi Tanvir!
Yes not writing regularly these days. Healing from loss of siblings is a long process. But they stay close to us even after leaving.
Its long I visited your blog. Will do the same soon. Thank You for your time, concern and love ā¤
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My pleasure and wish you are healed soon. Though the loss cannot be recovered.
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I’m sorry, Meenakshi. It’s never easy. The absence is felt, and will always be; just some days, in the future, perhaps not always pressing into every matter. Thinking of you, and wishing you an easier glide in 2019. Reading your poems has helped me through with my own loss, even many years ago, still. I really, especially loved the last verse of this poem. It is so special.
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Do you want to share or talk about the loss?
I’m glad you liked the poem. This is my way of dealing with pain, the writing.
I too wish you Happy and joyful 2019, stay blessed!
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Thanks, Meenakshi.
It comes out as it does; when it will, but not forced. I guess it works, and we all cope in our own manners, which is the best way, I guess.
Expression: writing, art, verbal, physical, etc. is the best catharsis. š
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That’s true
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Thanks. I hope you have a great day today! Be well. š
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Another heartfelt poem, Meenakshi. You are really too good with your words. Great poem.
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Thank You Kamal! Not as good as you š
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Welcome dear Meenakshi. We all r doing our bit in our writings. Welcome dear.
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