Tera jaana waise to badi baat nahi,
Bas yun hai jaise zammen par aasmaan nahi!
Zindagi to chalti hai chalti rahegi sada,
Hum zinda hain iss baat par to tumhe aitraaz nahi?
Kahin mil bhi jao agar nazrein nahi milne denge,
Tum ye na samjhna humein khud par ikhtiyaar nahi!
Tumhari chahat ne itna bhi bemarwat na kiya
Ki apni anna ka bhi humein gumaan nahi!
Tumhein rehbar khuda ka darza diya tha kabhi,
Ab lagta hai baatein dil ki kaarobaar to nahi!
Hamari chahat mein milawat hoti to accha hota,
Ab kissi ki pakizagi par humein aitbaar nahi!
Kaash yaadon se bhi kar sakte kabhi riha tumhein,
Kaise kahein inse bhi koi sarokaar nahi!
Khud ko khuda samajh faisla karne wale,
Ab kissi rehmat ke hum talabgaar nahi!
Though poem is in hindi but here is an effort to explain what is said here-
Though your leaving is not a big thing
It’s just like there is no sky on earth!
Life flows and will keep flowing
Hope you have no objection on my being alive!
If we ever meet in future, I won’t let meet our eyes!
I have not lost this control of mine!
Your love has not blinded me that much
That I have lost all my self respect!
Once I gave you status of God
Now it seems heart matters are just pure business!
My love should not had been so pure
Now on no one’s purity I have any trust!
I wish I could have released you from my memories
But how could I say I have no interest in them?
You think you yourself are God while making such decisions,
Now I need from you no merciful favours!
Copyright (c) 2018 Meenakshi Sethi, Wings Of Poetry
बहुत ही खूबसूरत 👌
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Thank you so much Gourav!
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Most welcome mam!! And believe me your writing style always inspires me.
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You made my day by saying that 🙂
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I would love to see your critique on my poems mam.. if you have spare time do visit my poem section.😊😊
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For sure I will
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Waah…Waah…Waah……
Kahin mil bhi jao agar nazrein nahi milne denge,
Tum ye na samjhna humein khud par ikhtiyaar nahi!
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Thank You for reading and liking 🙂
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Wow fantastic lines so well composed, Meenakshi. Leaving and departing from lives is so painful but time flies and that is life.
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Thank you so much Kamal! True that is life…
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Welcome dear Meenakshi..
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Oohhh wow Meenakshi!! Just got lost in those beautiful emotional lines. Amazing poem. Loved it
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Thank you so much Hema!
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It’s beautiful
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Thank You!
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Splendid, awesome fusion of Hindi and Urdu. Great piece Ms. Sethi.
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Thank You!
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Hi
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Bahut khoobsurat rachna h
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Thank You!
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I am new here. Plz check out my blog and provide your invaluable suggestions.
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Sure!
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It’s beautiful and strong Meenakshi 💕
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Thank You Cherry 💖
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Beautiful!!
Loved these lines:
Hamari chahat mein milawat hoti to accha hota,
Ab kissi ki pakizagi par humein aitbaar nahi!
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Thank You!!
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Iss kavita mein ajab si nasha hai jo ordinary mortals nahin samaj sakte. You are on an elevated path, Meenakshi and can feel the energy bursting. It comes through pain but there is an inherent cosmic power.
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I’m greatful for your words and vision Vishal! Glad that you are able to read the true essence of these lines.
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I can only take a bow 🙂
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🙏
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Wah Kya khoobsurati se likha hai!!! Wah wah wah wah!!!
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Thank You so much!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
A CLASSIC!
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👍
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