Strategy# daily prompt # season 4# attempt 82# haiku
strategy of breathes
keep alive breathing machines
factory of life
Strategy of breathe is to keep alive
Breathing machines
In factory of life
While and till
The soul learns
It’s lessons and raise itself
High
To fly towards its source
To be one with divine
Staying there
For many light years
Till once again
It starts it’s journey
From scratch
To adopt a new strategy
To live and breath once again
Creating a new story
Creating a new wave…
Copyright (c) 2018 Meenakshi Sethi, Wings Of Poetry
hmm.. got me thinking… Are we all just a factory of life making breath?
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Sometimes when life seems stagnant I do feel like a breathing machine till I make myself come out of it and remind that my purpose in life is not to just live it is more than that for sure…
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Yes, a constant reminder.
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First of all the title I liked it a lot, and regarding the poem have I need to say anything….actually am in a pondering mode…
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Write something on this title. I know you would create wonders !!
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Thanks for this honor…I’ll think over it…
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Beautiful imagery! ~Anne
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Meenakshi these lines are beyond imaginary. How come such thoughts came into you is raising my eyebrows.
It has two layers and chapters. First one to breathe and allow the Soul to raise high. Second to merge into the Source and again come back after some light years, this is beyond imaginary Meenakshi.
Poetry is Beautification of Life and YOU have done it.
Keep it going Dear
Shiva
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Thank you so much Shiva!
Life is a great teacher. My spiritual journey and readings helped me reach here.
Life and life after death are two things attracts me most.
You too are full of wisdom about this. Will read more of all I missed in your blog in last few months.
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I was beginning to think that these comments might have gone into your Spam.
Anyway, your journey is in the right path and I wish you reach the goal.
The Spiritual field is as vast as the universe. The shortest distance to the goal comes from blessings from the Lord, the Guru and from the Ones in the Path.
The Karma to the blessings; I wish YOU to take forth.
ππΆπ·
Shiva
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Oh! I’m sorry for late reply. I was not in town.
True Shiva! spiritual field has no end. This is a journey of life after life. Somethings are beyond our perception but yes even one step towards it is a step in right direction.
Thank you so much for your wishes! π
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π Exactly
Meanwhile kg you may read this Post below is the link:
https://theshivasponder.wordpress.com/2016/03/16/open-the-door-i-have-come/
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Sure
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Better read the comments too, it may help.
Right I am also on the page re reading
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