Eternal Love!

Entertain# daily prompt # season 4# attempt 75

She loves him and he loves her
Then why are they not together?

She keeps revolving around him 24*7
He keeps her warm with all his pleasure

She is alive just because of his light
He never stops shining to help her fight

Though distant, they share a very deep relation
How they entertain each other with passion!

I wish someday they could stay together forever
Without bringing their hearts any devastations

Universe should be flexible in matter of love
To end the distance between Earth and Sun!

Only Sun has to learn to control his fire
Loving heart of her is not meant to get burn in desires!

Her desire and his fire should blend with each other
To complete this greatest love story of The Universe!

Copyright (c) 2018 Meenakshi Sethi, Wings Of Poetry 

31 thoughts on “Eternal Love!

              1. Bit better …not complete to expectations…lol

                Love kidding around you…will you mind teasing you …or you love…this gesture of mine….


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