Entertain# daily prompt # season 4# attempt 75
She loves him and he loves her
Then why are they not together?
She keeps revolving around him 24*7
He keeps her warm with all his pleasure
She is alive just because of his light
He never stops shining to help her fight
Though distant, they share a very deep relation
How they entertain each other with passion!
I wish someday they could stay together forever
Without bringing their hearts any devastations
Universe should be flexible in matter of love
To end the distance between Earth and Sun!
Only Sun has to learn to control his fire
Loving heart of her is not meant to get burn in desires!
Her desire and his fire should blend with each other
To complete this greatest love story of The Universe!
Copyright (c) 2018 Meenakshi Sethi, Wings Of Poetry
Beautiful !!
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Thank You!
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What a great metaphor for love and dilemma. Great work, Meenakshi!
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Thank you so much Miriam!
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You’re welcome, Meenakshi!
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Beautiful.Loved it
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Thank you Megha!
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Beautiful
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Thank You!
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Lol how are you ?
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I’m great! Thanks
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Arre theek se batao kaisi ko….
I am “great” is bit formal to me…
Haha lol just kidding..
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Ok, I’m fine, I’m good, I’m enjoying each day of life…. ab theek hai 🙂
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Bit better …not complete to expectations…lol
Love kidding around you…will you mind teasing you …or you love…this gesture of mine….
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Beautiful!!!
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Thank you!
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Shades of intensity and powerplay done so well, M!
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Thank you Vishal!
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Very well written poem Meenakshi mam ☺️👍.
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Thank you so much! I will check it soon.
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Sure Meekanshi mam…
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Stunningly beautiful!
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Thank you!
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You are very welcome.
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One of the most amazing poems written here on WordPress, wow
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Thank you so much! I’m glad to hear these inspiring words!
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The last para is commendable
Shiva
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Thank You Shiva!
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Awesome writing.
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Thank you so much
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