Fluff # daily prompt
Water of ocean evaporates
Accumulate to be Fluff cloud
When unable to handle
Outside pressure
Downpour from the sky
Water of eyes evaporates
Accumulate to be fluff heart
When burden of emotions increase
Beyond control
Tears rush out from the eyes
Copyright 2017 Meenakshi Sethi, Wings Of Poetry
Both downpours so real, cleansing and beautiful in their own way.
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Yes they actually are cleansing .Thank you Pragal!
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You are welcome.
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It feels good to have downpour of rain as well as a good cry. Nice pick of image, Meenakshi!😊
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Thank you Miriam! Yes both helps to lessen the burden and make us see everything clearly once again,completing the cycle.
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Yes, it’s so true, Meenakshi. I remember teaching the water cycle to the kids. It’s true to the nature and also true to life. I had several big sobbing in my life. felt better after that even though situations remained the same!!
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Yes situations remain same but we change feeling better
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Yes, that’s true.
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Beautiful analogy MS….short but meaningful poem….
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Thank you Human! That reminds you I missed so much of your beautifully written posts. Going to visit soon 🙂
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Hmmmm….is it? Looks like ….I need to start writing again….
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Oh why again! Let me read the missed ones first
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