Pain

Toothbrush# daily prompt #season 3#attempt 26

Your toothbrush, towel and comb
Are all looking abandoned
Come back and use them
Once again with your sweet dimple smile
While singing that old song…
But Alas! Deep we all know
That is not possible anymore 
Hopes are fading fast
Eyes are shut lost in prayers
Chants for your peaceful departure
Is what we are asking from God!
No pain could be greater than this
No loss is more than this loss.

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18 thoughts on “Pain

          1. I had a sense of what had happened. My deepest condolences to your loss of your dear brother. I prayed that he has entered eternity where there is no pain. I pray for the peace and comfort to you and your family. I did a post yesterday regarding that. I also thought of my son-in-law’s mom who passed away two years ago yesterday. I think all the thoughts came because I was thinking of your brother.

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  1. “Your toothbrush, towel and comb
    Are all looking abandoned
    Come back and use them
    Once again with your sweet dimple smile
    While singing that old song…”

    Oh! I liked these lines, about the things that are left when a loved one is taken away by illness. It makes it all seem too real, these leftover things. Thank you, Meenakshi. ❤

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