Loop#Daily Prompt# Season2#Attempt100
Loop of smoke
Released with burning cigarettes
Getting high in air
With fury and tensions
Can it actually free soul
From all these matters?
Why burn health with
Burning dangerous pipes
When all these loops
Are only in mind
Body is temporary garment
Soul is free pure n white
So quit this habit
That is destroying your wealth
Remember cigarette smoking
Is injurious to health !
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heartily agree with your sentiments here … I have written 3 poems about this slow form of suicide
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That’s true this is slow suicide
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You so beautifully arrived to the often repeated and very significant conclusion.
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Thank You Pragal! Thankfully no one known of my own smoke. But when I see today’s youth smoking and feeling cool I really feel bad.
Anyway with this post I completed my 100 day daily prompt. ☺
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Yes thankfully no one very close to me smokes but I had this conversation just an hour ago with a young man about how it is a norm …and I feel scared about it for them.
You are welcome and Congratulations on the 100! You make it look so easy.
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Congrats on the century Di….
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Thank You Sangbad ☺
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NTM…
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Do you feel this way about marijuana consumption?
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All tobacco consumption and any kind of smoke is not good for health.
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Loved the lines body is only a garment and soul is white 👍well said.
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Thank You Deepika! 🙂
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You are welcome ☺️
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A good social message put across beautifully!
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Thank You Shaloo!
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Indeed they are adding extra stress and losing immune power by smoking ,nice message
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Thank You!
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Very nicely penned the harmful effect of smoking… The end is superb… 🙂
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Thank You Ashish!
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Beautiful yet strong words Meenakshi !!
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Thank You Cherry! 💖
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Sadly people still dont get it…well educated youths puffing away ..and if you try to stop them then they will argue!! I tried stopping few of my friends and got back lines like dont give lecture….one or two don’t harm….they can quit anytime they want to….their God is with them hence nothing can harm them..etc etc…so i stopped 😒😞
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Sadly till they learn the truth a lot of harm has already been done
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Yeah the sad truth 😞
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You simply Awesome in expressions…I loved each of them.
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