Distant#Daily Prompt #Season 2#Attempt 83
With every moving step in different directions
With every passing minute without interaction
With every negative thought sinking within
With every criticism coming towards me
With every day of dramas and tortures
With every sign of disrespect
With every increasing long silence
With every sign of decaying relation
I am fading away and you didn’t even notice
We are growing distant
I am growing Distant …
Copyright ©2017, Meenakshi Sethi, Wings Of Poetry
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Beautifully penned.
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Thank You Kitty!
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Welcome 🙂
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Lines were soo powerful..it created a real scene..well done
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Thank You!
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Love this
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Umm….hmmm…no…whaat…
Lips zipped…wonderful Di…
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Thank You Sangbad!!
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Phirse…wahi baat…NTM
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Distant and done
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Yes! Thanks!
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It’s very tough to stand emotional abuse like this
Real and true picture of most women
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Yes! Time to change the society
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Agree
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Thank You!!
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Nicely described…how people fail to realize or overlook the other person’simportance in a relationship overtime…how that other person is emotionally suffering silently because of them and their indifference… silently hoping that one day things will change…hoping that their pain will someday be noticed….hope is all they have…but it never happens…and that kills the relationship eventually…reminds me of Ghalib’s lines….’मसरूफ रहने का अंदाज़ तुम्हें तन्हा न कर दे ग़ालिब, रिश्ते फुरसत के नही तवज्जो के मोहताज होते हैं’….
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That’s so true- love the lines of Galib!
These famous poets used to be so deep and far sighted.
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Yes true…and that’s what made them famous….the ability to not just describe their own feelings but feelings of other people’s as well…
And btw you may want to correct the typo in line 7 😊
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Oh Thanks for pointing it! Going to fix 🙂
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This is how couples grow apart… Beautifully described!
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Thank You!
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Such an intricate piece of work.:)
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Thank You so muh!
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Pleasure,friend.:)
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This is such an interesting way to write your poem, Meenakshi! I especially liked the lines “With every negative thought sinking within/With every criticism coming towards me”!
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Thank You Theresa! This is how we grow apart!
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