Notorious#Daily Prompt #Season 2#Attempt 67#Lanturne
Lanturne is a five line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of-
one
two
three
four
one
Sucks
Nectar
Of flower
Notorious
Bee
Fly
Leaving
It lonely
And heartbroken
Lost
Poor
Flower
Gave it’s heart
Along nectar
Cry
But
Heartless
Bee never
Looked back left it
Sad
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Wow, thank you for sharing this and the explanation. Though, if you’d never explained it, I would’ve still found this poem unbelievably beautiful! ❤︎
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Thank You so much for this! I’m so happy you found it beautiful! 💖
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You are a beautiful flower
Why bother about bee
Bee can steal but not create on it’s own
Creator always overpowers others
I like the nectar in your poetry 💕
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Thank You so much Cherry! Love your comment 🌷
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💕😍😘
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You made every word beautiful!
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Thank You Miriam 🌷
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You’re welcome, Meenakshi! ♥*♥*♥
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Super
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Thank You Girija! 🌷
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Thank you for the nee poetry form. Will try it. You’ve done a great job with it!
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Thank You Smitha! Yea please give it a try!
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Tried it Meenakshi. Do check it out. It’s called- One life. Live it well! Let me know if I did justice😊
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Wow! Sure going to check! 👍
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Wow!! What a beautiful poem and equally beautiful piece of knowledge share. I’m waiting to try my hands on this form, thanks a lot for sharing the knowledge 🙂
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Thank You so much Kitty! Please give it a try its fun 🌷☺
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Yes, will definitely do.
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This is a new form of poetry for me. Thanks for sharing the explanation!
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Thank You Shaloo! This is my first attempt too 🌷
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Reflecting break up stories..very nice comparison
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Thank You so much! 🌷
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The flow and contrast are superbly done:)
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Thank You so much Vishal 🌷
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I
Love this
Beautiful
A great poem
Thanks
My attempt at Lanturne 😛 not as great as yours though. Such a wonderful poetry form.
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Thank You so much! 🌷
You have attempted this! That’s great! Please share with me!!
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Oh!! You are talking about this comment 😃 wow!! Even that is great👍
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Yes, haha. It’s not that of a great attempt since it couldn’t be noticed 😀 Thank you
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☺🌷
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A ‘sweet’ poem, Meenakshi!
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Thank You! 🌷
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Beautiful ❤
you are really gifted to write beautiful things 🙂
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
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