Control#Daily Prompt #Season 2#Attempt 50
Control and filter your words
Before you throw them out
From your mouth
They are the shaprest weapon
That could pierce
Soft hearts
Leaving them bleed
For rest of life
Slowly letting
The beauty of relation die
Anything left after that
Are just residues
And little sparks
That keep burning
The hurts of the past!
Copyright © 2017 All rights Reserved Wings Of Poetry, Meenakshi Sethi
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Thanks for the reblog!
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This is of utmost importance in our lives which we many a time fail to consider
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And hurt those who loves us most!
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True
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So true! Slowing down, using spiritual discernment is so important. It does take practice as it does not come naturally! Thank you!
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Thank You Rick! Yes it needs practice and control!
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Sometimes under the spell of anger we tend to focus on better comebacks and in the process end up saying negative stuff that we thought of but kept away from saying it for we were aware of it’s inappropriateness but under the fit of rage, logic loses its place and we end up saying stuff that is always remembered as a sword stabbed in our chest of emotions. It would be great if we knew when to control, when to stop and let it pass without indulging in belittling the significant other.
Great post Meenakshi !!
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Great observation Cherry! This is how it all happens. But these are feelings and emotions which keep on changing. If not controlled can spoil and damage relations.
Thank You Cherry I really appreciate your deep understanding of human behavior!
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Yes it can and it’s strange but resonance of those harsh words is so strong that we end up remembering only those and it overshadows the good times spent together over a time. Lots of love Meenakshi!!
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To you too Cherry! 😘😘
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Beautifully said.
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Thank You!
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Wow, a beautiful piece of poetry.
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Thank You Kitty!
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Welcome 🙂
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It is so true, Meenakshi! It’s unfortunate that the hurting words linger longer than loving words!
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Ironically true Miriam! Since they are spoken with such a high intensity that they keep on sticking like a bob again n again…
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How well I know, Meenakshi!
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Fact of life. Tongue have no bones but can hurt many!! Think before you speak
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Thank You!! Yes without any bone it is sharpest weapon and strongest healing tool depends how we use it!
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Absolutely true and our tongue is always sharper and once we open our mouth and say what we want cannot ever rectify again. Meenakshi you have written so well and the hurt of the past always remains. Loved this deep and awesome words of a great poem.
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Thank You So Much Kamal! 😘
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Welcome Meenakshi.
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well said and well written
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Thank You!
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Brilliant
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Thank You!
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It’s bit like throwing a stone. Well said that.
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Yes it’s like that! Thank You Sumith!
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😜 No words to speak more😷
Tongue is such a dangerous part of the body, you handled it properly , no mooooore😷
Shiva🎶
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Thank You! ☺
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Wish people could understand this before uttering vicious words!! The harm they do is much worse than any physical harm. 😔
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And hurt last lifelong….Thanks for your time!
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Yes life-long! Words cause an irrecoverable scar
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