Measure#Daily Prompt#Season 2#Attempt 32#Tanka
curves of roads enters
to measure depth of forest
and lose themselves there
finding no way out from woods
love to lay there forever
Measure#Daily Prompt#Season 2#Attempt 32#Tanka
curves of roads enters
to measure depth of forest
and lose themselves there
finding no way out from woods
love to lay there forever
a different type of poem Di…an utmost surprise…
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Yea getting bore writing same type daily. Tired of my depressing state now. Want to come out of it. 🙂
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good to hear that…s’how…
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Short but beautiful!
You can also check out my post on love.
https://vickieshubb.wordpress.com/2017/04/14/what-is-love/#more-1200
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Thank You! I will check soon!
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I’d be waiting.
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Doesn’t the forest work like a bait?
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Yes, it provokes, tempts the roads to first enter then make them prisoner forever n ever…
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Quite right…. 🙂
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Wow…..beautiful….
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Thank You!
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This is enticingly beautiful!
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Thank You so much Pragal!
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The wood looks mysterious! I heard of the documentary about the forest below Mount Fuji in Japan. That’s another story!
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Forests are as mysterious as hearts of people. I will search about that documentary on you tube!
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Let it be a surprise for you. If it’s not on youtube. I’ll give you a one-line summery!
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Ok Please do that
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It’s a sad story. Suicide is common practice in Japan especially the pressure of competition on the young people. When they failed, they would go deep into the forest, and couldn’t find their way out and died in it. The document shows all the signs nailing on the trees, telling people that there is hope for them, go back before they get lost. Some people camped there close to the entrance in case they changed their mind. It also shows the forest guard talking to one camper. Some people were not sure if they wanted to go “all the way” to die, so they tie ropes along their trail in case they want to find their way out. The forest is thick with no paths.
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That’s really really sad. This world needs more of spiritual people these days to spread peace and light in this darkening world.
I wish peace, wisdom and simplicity to whole world.
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One blogger teaches in South Korea. He did a post on Suicide in that country and said about the same issue. Hong Kong used to be the same. It’s getting better now that the compulsive ed. is up to 9th grade. Student could take trade ed. instead of aiming for college.
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It’s bliss. Dream destination to let the self loose and in quest of this limitless journey of discovery:) Of course, the words compliment the picture with fiery passion.
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Thank You so much Vishal! Yes it’s an absolute bliss!
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Beautiful poem Meenakshi
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Thank You Sumith!
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Thank You once again!
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Work should be done regarding this. There is so much to do for coming generations and protection of innocent youngsters.
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I dwell in the mystery of God’s love, losing myself in His great love , finding no way out is good for our human eagles who need a love like this when we humanly seek for un-perfection we would not find none because God’s love is perfect. Amen!
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