Record#daily prompt#season 2#attempt 1
Colours of memories
Are fading away
Our journey together
Is so short
Yet we let the ego win
And allow pride capture our heart!
The keeper of, records of our breathes
Is running his pen recording fast
Record of our time left here
Least he cares of wasted part
Yet we let the ego win
And allow pride capture our heart!
Let this ice sublime away
Let the love keep us warm
Reviving dead cold is necessary
Unless we want to live with corpse
Yet we let the ego win
And allow pride capture our heart!
Why our soul should carry with
After leaving body this heavy load?
Before merging in ocean,every river
Leaves behind,heavy stones
Yet we let the ego win
And allow pride capture our heart!
If you can win your ego someday
And crush the pride to save the heart
Then come to paint some more memories
As our journey together is so short!
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So nice Meenakshi 👍 Well written ☺️
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Thank You Priya! 🙂
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You are welcome dear ☺️
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This is a gorgeous blog!
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Thank You so much! You are welcome here!
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Inspiring and sublime too
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Thank You Kiran! 🙂
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Beautiful Meenakshi. I loved the concluding paragraph, so much meaning in it 💙❤
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Thank You so much Radhika! I fell in love with my own writings when such comments come from you! 💖 ☺
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The conclusion is so apt with so much to retrospect about.. very beauifully worded.
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Thank You! I’m glad you liked it 💖
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Nice one.yes we have very less time.It’s like video game with time limit.How can we waste your time on something that gives nothing’s but drag down you to hell
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That’s so true! Thank You so much! 💖
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‘If you can win your ego someday
And crush the pride to save the heart
Then come to paint some more memories
As our journey together is so short!’
These wonderful and true lines summaries your great poem Meenakshi. If only we can win over our ego then we do not have to worry at all, cause our Journey will be known so perfectly to us and we will take the Path to Knowing who we are and come to paint the memories of our life. Great poem.
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Thank You so much Kanal! Finally used your great line!! Thank You for that too. I’m so glad that no matter how short our journey is I have great, inspiring friends like you in it! 💖😘
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Welcome dear Meenakshi and yes in this short journey we have found some beautiful and great friends who have got connected on this wonderful platform. Loved your poem dear. Happy day to you.
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💖💕
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Love and hugs to you dear.
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It’s a great reminder meenakshi.. yes, it’s a struggle to win over your ego at times..
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So true Akhila, it is and we lose many beautiful relations due to it.
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Mm.. some conscious move should be taken..
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Amazing 😊 specially last lines.
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Thank You Veronica! ☺
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Meaningful,
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Thank You!
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beautifully written mam 🙂
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Thank You Shruti! ☺
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Wow so touching and beautiful!
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Thank You Pragal! 🙂
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Not just the words and lines are to be appreciated but the wisdom that back them. It’s better to let go of ego to hold some happiness in our hearts. Two strong ego otherwise can never carve happiness together.
Great post !!
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Thank You so much Cherry! I’m so glad that you see it in that way. It made my day 💖 ☺
You never fail to catch the right spirit behind my writings! Lots of love dear!!
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I am glad that it made you happy 😍
The feeling is mutual 🙂
Love and respect 💕
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Colors of memories…you gave a different meaning to this words Di…and I gracefully bow down in front of you…
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Thank You Sangbad and thanks to you and Kamal from boundless blessings for helping me frame this ☺
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Reblogged this on bootsandmasks and commented:
A beautifully written poem
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Thank You so much for this kind gesture 🙂
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A beautiful written poem that I relate to in my every day living. I am constantly writing while my memory just as quickly is forgetting or confusing memories from the past. This poem is truly inspirational. Thanks for sharing. X julie
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Thank You so much Julie! May your memories stay with you live and fresh 💖
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You my friend have done what I call threading the needle
Very powerful
Thank you for your like
As Sheldon Always
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Thank You so much Sheldon! 💖
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Lovely piece of poetry.
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Thank You!
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Sure! Welcome on WP!
I wish you success and happy journey here ☺
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That was amazing a really modern aspect of poetry I really liked it.
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Thank You so much! ☺
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Nice!
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Thank You!
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Beautifully written.
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Thank You!!
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