Replacement#Daily Prompt#Attempt 71
Picture credit: Ravi Trehen
Drowning in fear
Drenched in pain
Losing someone dear
Making me insane
It’s not easy to bear
Walking without you on this lane
There is no Replacement here
Every relation is special in its own frame!
Though death has no gear
It’s speed no one can tame
But life is an important affair
Running from it is a shame
Can’t you hear my pleas so sincere
See my soul is burning in these flames!
No one can replace you my brother
Don’t lose so easily in this game!
Thank you for sharing your gifts! Much emotion here…and much truth!
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Thank You Rick! How I wish to write a happy poem for my brother someday, whom we are losing day by day
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Being knowing you s’where near to very well I can relate to the last 2 lines–No one can replace you my brother/ Donβt lose so easily in this game! Beautiful poem Ma’am & you again nailed it.
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Thank You Sangbad! Pray for my brother’s life
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yup…always…
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Beautiful! Ease, joy and love to you and yours.
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Thank You Pragal!
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feeling your pain through your words here. Praying for your brother.
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Thank You Arjun!
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Is this dedicated to your brother ?
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Yes!
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Nice one
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Your poem oozes out with sincere love and pain you feel for your brother. God bless!
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Thanks Radhika
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Can feel your pain for your dear brother, meenakshi. Hope he’s well soon.
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Thank You Deepika, I really wish that!
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Dear God, hear Meenakshi’s cry, holding on to her faith as she tries. Have mercy on her brother whom You also care, I know Your miracle is still there.
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Thank You so much Miriam! We all are praying for that miracle! Yrsterday when he told me he has not much time left and cried it tore my heart. I’m so restless after talking to him.
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I’m walking and praying for your brother
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Thank You so much! Need it π
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I’m still praying for you both!
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and praying for you too!
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What a flair of words Meenakshi and am sorry to hear of your dear brother. We all are praying for him and god bless to him and to the rest of your family too. Take care dear and keep faith in him who knows what is best.
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Thank You so much Kamal! A miracle saved his life last year too I’m sure he will do the same again!
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Yes of course dear keep on taking our God in everything and tell him to be also carefree and to be positive too. All will be good, I am praying for his well being Meenakshi. πππππ
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Appreciate your concern!
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Welcome dear and keep me updated too. Have a nice day.
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“Losing someone dear” – touched me! π
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Thank You Theresa
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