There is a Cinderella in every soul
Seaking freedom is her goal
From cruel, unfair ways of life
Torturing and making her cry
Just like Cinderella our lost soul
Is in search of peace and light
All she needs is a vision to see
Right opportunity gifted by divine
Sitting on wagon of meditation
Pulled by peace and calm vision
When she starts her journey inwards
She reaches a divine ball room
To dance on tune of new insight
Here she meets her Prince charming
The pure source of calm light
Who was waiting to meet from ages
His lost part to end her night
While dancing on these fine tunes
Our Cinderella may lose sometimes
Shoes of patience and hope
And run back barefoot in a hurry
Towards this illusionary life
The Prince will surely find her back
If she will stay pure and white
Life is nothing but search of self
Keeping faith and moving inwards
Towards source of that divine light
Which can help this inner Cinderella
To end her fight making her light
Providing freedom
From clutches of cruel step mother
Which is illusion and dark night
Finally merging in him
Getting married with faith and wisdom
Reaching the magnificent palace
The home of divine!!
In response to invitation to write on Cinderella theme from Theresa
https://ithinkisayido.wordpress.com/2016/12/23/city-of-magic/
https://tjbarkerseattle.wordpress.com/2016/12/23/cinderella-a-classic-folk-tale-retold/
Meenakshi, I so love the spirit of this poem! I’m especially drawn to “Life is nothing but search of self/Keeping faith and moving inwards/Towards source of that divine light” – so beautiful and so moving. Thank you!
We’re still inviting writers/bloggers to write your own “Cinderella-themed” post as part of our collaboration project. Anyone who’s interested, feel free to click on one of the pingback links in Meenakshi’s wonderful post. 🙂
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Thank you so much for giving me this honor Theresa! I’m glad I could make it. Lots of love 💖
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Thank you so much for joining in the excitement. Theresa and I am getting even more excited each week. This makes an awesome reblog for me. I really love this poem and it’s spirit. Thank you for sharing. Much love and hugs 💖🤗
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Thank You so much Anne! I got the response from!Theresa and was wondering what you are thinking about this….
Now I’m smiling reading your comment. Thank you so much to both of you. I will keep checking other response to this theme too! This is very innovative thought indeed! 💖
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I’m really loving it, as I love your poem. I am convinced having writers and authors collaborate on a project is the best! Writing is a rather lonely vocation but collaborating makes a difference and publishing an Anthology will give many of us the appreciation we often miss although there because we doubt ourselves. I’m looking forward to many more contributions. 😊
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So am I! This is a great start!
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Ma’am, have to read the closing lines of yours poems more than twice…and the realization after that gives insight into the life, its chores and moments specifically…and this is why your poems are inspiring as well as enchanting one…Life is nothing but search of self/Keeping faith and moving inwards/Towards source of that divine light–like these lines mostly…
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Thank You so much Sangbad. Love story of life and soul always ends positively. No matter how many times we need to reborn to reach salvation…. This is the final and true purpose of life.
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I want to write on this but being in block I can’t…how long is this open…
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Take your time and write I guess it is open till long! All the best! May this block end soon!
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Hi. We have tentatively set the deadline for 28 February so there’s a lot of time. Once we have the compilation, we will also have time to edit and polish for the publication. I’ll be checking out your blog. Theresa (comment below) has a suggestion and I’m curious how it will come out. All the best. Looking forward to reading your work.
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Wow beautifully written I loved it 💙
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Thank You! 💖
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Hi Sangbad, since your work is dark, any chance you might consider a “dark” version of the folk tale, or a dark work related to the tale? I can imagine something very unique … !
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I’m sure he can! He is an extremely talented writer!!
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I’d love to see a dark take on this tale, something different than the “norm”! 🙂
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Thanks for your suggestion..give me a couple of weeks to write it down…
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Hi Sangbad, my friend and fellow writer Liz Kellebrew did her post on something only slightly related to Cinderella, and if you haven’t seen it, it may be of inspiration to you… here is the link: https://lizkellebrew.com/2017/01/11/the-tribulations-of-james-the-second/
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Thanks, Meenakshi Ma’am…I’ll try the best in my possible way…Thanks, Anne J. for the info…
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This version of Cinderella is so enchanting
I loved it Meenakshi
On a lighter note
Mother in laws are like step mom and rather than loosing our shoes, we search for our shoes to run away from home to catch a breath of peace and silence
Lol
That could be another version of Cinderella though
But yours one is beautiful
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Haha…here I agree with you not only mom in laws but circumstances and responsibilities after marriage sometimes crush us.
Hey your idea of writing a funny Cinderella is also good. Why don’t you try and participate. I would love to read it. Click on the link and submit your article or poem.
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Thanks Meenakshi!!
Will try my hand at it 😊
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Nice imagery Meenakshi😃
The way you portrayed inner Cinderella is praiseworthy.
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Thank You so much! I’m happy that you find it praisesworthy! 💖
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Thank you for selecting it! 🙂
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Never i could imagine such a powerful theme with Cinderella…really appreciable
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Thank You Akhila!! 💖
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I think you nailed it.
This has been THE favorite fairytale from back then for me.
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Thank You so much Asha! When you or Akhila praise my work I feel so happy as my work is nothing in front of you guys….you both are amazing writers and yet so humble! Thanks again 🙂
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My goodness! Did that melt my heart? You have an amazing style and a way with words that seldom do any honey, do not belittle yourself. 🙂 And keep winning hearts like you do. ❤
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Once again I’m speechless! Thank You so much!
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Always up to make you smile. 😉
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So beautiful written Meenaksi and loved your awesome picture too. Readimg your poem I too felt like a Cindrella. Great.
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Hi Kamal! You are a Cinderella!! Thank You so much dear for your appreciation!! 💖
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Thanks Meenakshi and you too are a wonderful cindrella with outpouring of great and beautiful poems.
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Haha…love you!
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Same here dear Love u too and always remain happy and blessed.
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Wow. Unbelievable yaar. You totally nailed it.
Explaining a person’s soul searching (just like in the scriptures) linked with a childhood fantasy story. Really beautiful indeed. What a talent, Meenakshi. Cheers.. 😀
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Thank You so much Varun! Your comment made my day! 💖
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Thank You so much!! 💖
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the best Cinderella themed poem I’ve EVER read
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Thank You so much Frazier!
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Of course! It was lovely!
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Justice done to the Invitation
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Thank You so much!
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Your work is such a masterpiece. I loved every bit of it , especially the line where you describe the prince as ” The pure source of calm light ” . Wow , you killed it.
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Thank You very much!
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You are welcome.
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Hi Meenakshi! We are asking the submitters for our Cinderella challenge to provide an email address for exchanging files, etc., in preparation for the next step of the project. At your convenience, would you send your preferred email address to “theresa.barker at goddard.edu”? We will be in touch in a few days with more information on the project. Thanks! – Theresa and Anne J.
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Yea sure Theresa! Thanks for informing.
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Of course! Have a great day! 🙂
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You can contact me on msethi272@gmail.com
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