Someday#Daily Prompt#Attempt 53

Someday when last sun will rise
Someday when last moon will shine
Someday when all pain will end
Someday when last word will said
Someday when I will close my eyes
Someday when I will never rise
Someday when I will enter that light
That day will make you cry
For all that precious lost time
That someday you will realise
How you killed me
When I was still alive…

31 thoughts on “Someday

  1. Meenakshi, I especially liked “That day will make you cry/For all that precious lost time”. I think this may be about a person who hurt you, but I also think this phrase could be about myself, for how I regret times in the past when I lost time second-guessing myself or obsessing about things that weren’t that important. It reminds me how the best poetry connects to something different for each reader – like yours! ๐Ÿ™‚

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