Discover#Daily Prompt#Attempt 35
God we need to talk
Are you hearing me lord?
Or super incharge?
What should I call?
You are hiding behind
So many names
I have no clue
Which is original
And which one is fake?
But
Enough is enough
You have to come out
When I shout
Calling for your attention
We need some serious chit chat
Face to face
Be a man of your words
You said-‘What you seek you get’
Then why I’m here?
Suffering for the acts of kindness?
That’s not what I was seeking!
You told-‘What goes around comes back’
Then why I’m getting back this pain?
I sent out only love
And see what I gain?
All I want is little love and warmth!
Wrap me in your peaceful calm!
And take me away in your nest
Far from all this noise and frowns
Where I could Discover
Your healing bright light, since
I’m tired now and want to rest!
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Well saidππ
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Thank You Shalini!!
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A wonderful prayer and poem! Merry Christmas and a happy new year!
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Thank You! Merry Christmas and a very happy new year to you too!
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Thank You so much for the reblog!
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Omg! This is amazing. π
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Thank You Shubham!
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This was just beautiful and outstanding. Beyond words…
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Thank You dear! π
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You write soo beautifully. I hope the day will come when I’ll write like this, one day….
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I love this! It perfectly summarises my relationship with God and religion in general. What I’ve failed to put into words all my life, you’ve said perfectly β€
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Thank You! Glad it help give your thoughts some words π
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Such a beautiful prayer… π
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Thank You Mani! π
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I love this one Meenakshi…it is beautiful! π
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Thank You Divya π
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Thank you for sharing your walk of faith! Over time, on my wayward spiritual journey, I am convinced that God hears every word of every prayer. I also believe God answers in His time. For me, some prayers were not answered for years. I realize now at the time of the prayer, I was not spiritually ready or mature enough to receive it then.
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Thank You Rick for sharing your experience! You are right he does answer when we are ready and mature enough to hear…
I do believe in him and sometimes just talk with him like a friend! π
I guess Its best to share with him than the world who judge you or are fake at your face.
Thanks for reading and sharing!! Merry Christmas friend! ββ
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God wants us to draw near to Him and ” just talk with Him like a friend.” That is a beautiful testimony. On my blog I sometimes write about the struggle to quiet my inner self during prayer so I can hear God’s whisper. Merry Christmas!
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Thank You! I will explore your blog to read it all!
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Better get some coffee! Thank you so much! I hope you like it.
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beautiful poem, M! when you have rested adequately, pse write the next poem..and the next and the rest
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Lol π You are too much Hari! Sure I will take some rest and then write next… Thank You!! π
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hahaha….
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hope we had interplanetary roaming facility….
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I wish! π
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Hmm.
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Good to see you back!
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Merry Christmas.
Good posts, beautiful blog.
Congratulations.
Welcome to see my creations:
http://paintdigi.com
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Thank You! Sure I will visit soon!
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you’r welcome friend π
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Super Meenakshi, ‘I am tired now and I want to rest’. What a stanza and God where r u, I am calling out from every corner but u do not heed me. Loved it, awesome but u know he is there watching his game of creating us. ππππππππ
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Thank You Kamal! Agree with you! He is watching over us always! And answer our prayers too! This was the best Christmas of my life! π
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Oh wow am so happy for you dear Meenakshi to know that. Merry Christmas and have a happy great year too.
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ββ‘β
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Thanks.
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Lovely Poem.. I wanted to call this a Prayer, rather.. Keep going π
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Thank You Dilip! π
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Thats wow
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Thank You!! And welcome on my blog!!
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