Enthusiasm#Daily Prompt#Attempt 33
You changed a catterpillar
To a butterfly
Helped her grew wings
Showed her how to fly
Then fled away from her life
She finds her colours
So colourless now
She wants to go back
But don’t know how
To those old times
When she was a shy catterpillar
Full of Enthusiasm
And you were part of her life…
Brilliant imagery. Best of yours. Meenakshi š
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Thank You Asha š
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I admire your ability to come up with beautiful poems in a jiffy. Lovely Meenakshi ššš
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Thank You so much Radhika š
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Very true radhi…i second that
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Thank You Akhila š
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Thanks Shalini š
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Is a catterpillar like a kitten?
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Check life cycle of butterfly
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Thank you for adding it in your link
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wow…
absolutely simple yet captivating ..
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Thank You Varun!
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Amazing! š
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Thank You Aanchal š
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I like that.. but I don’t wanna go back.. hope all is well my friend.. Merry Christmas šš..
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Merry Christmas and yes all is well, this is just an attempt to attempt the daily prompt! Thanks for your concern though š
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You’re welcome š
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Just so beautiful Meenakshi…you are immensely talented!
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That’s a very big compliment Divya! Thank you so much! You are generous š
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Heartbreaking; oh! Beautiful photo and poem.
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Thank You!!
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Beautiful and so true in so many ways!
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Thank You Pragal! š
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Meenakshi, I love the images your post! I don’t know where they come from, but they are very evocative. Thanks!
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Hi Theresa! The images I choose from Pinterest. They help my poems to deliver their message. I’m glad you like them š
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beautiful porm, M…cheers
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Thank You friend! š
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cling…(cheers)
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Cheers š
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write a poem on cling…cheers!
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Hahaha….ok as you say! I will write soon š
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hahaha…cheers, then!
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Cheers š»
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Wow Meenakshi absolutely captivating and so beautifully penned. I loved these lines they were so spell binding “You changed a catterpillar
To a butterfly
Helped her grew wings
Showed her how to fly
Then fled away from her life” and then she was devastated and did not know what was enthusiasm. Too good.
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Glad you liked them so much! Thank you for your nice words Kamal! š
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Yes Meenakshi and you are always welcome dear friend. How are you.
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Hi! I’m good, enjoying winters and your wonderful share š
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Hey thanks and our Mumbai is not at hot just a little cool where we do not sweat.
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Its beautiful ā¤
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Thank You!
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Present have never been bad, but you can only cherish where is your focus. Even present can be made beautiful thinking about past but present is eternally beautiful.
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Yes, so true! Present is all we have and making it beautiful is in our hands! Thanks for inspirational words!!
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Hmmmm
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Perfect Christmas gift for me!! š
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Thanks for the link
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