Sacred#Daily Prompt#Attempt 16
At the end of every day
He kissed her forehead
Bidding her goodbye
With promise to meet again
With new sunrise
To bring her more smiles
He is her hope for life
His heat and her desires
Works as fire
The warmth of their love
Give birth
To new lives
And helps keep
Balance in
Yin and yang
And vividity of life
This is about
Earth and Sun
Best examples of
Sacred and eternal love!
“Sacred and eternal love” such a blessing! Thank you for sharing your gift!
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Thank You so much Rick! I’m greatful for your words!
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Lovely.
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Thank You!
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Beautiful!
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Thank You!
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I love when the sun and moon are viewed as members of a romantic relationship. Very good poem!
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Thank You Shane! I love to include these in my poem as well!
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How beautiful! I never anticipated that it referred to the sun & the moon but was pleasantly surprised! 😊
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Thank you Divya…it is about sun and earth! 🙂
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sacred love is eternal..and eternal love is sacred! nice poem ma’am
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Thank You!
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Truly a sacred and eternal love, the ending was a pleasant surprise…..I had no inkling. Another beautiful one from your chest of poetries.
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Thank You Radhika! Your words means a lot! 💖😍
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A pleasure always dear 😘😘
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Meenakshi..eternal love of earth and sun..
it is so kind of you to add that verses by Sufi poet..you are really a pure heart..
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Thank You so much Akhila! 💖
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Such a beautiful example of beautiful love.
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Thank You! And we all are blessed with their love!
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yes indeed
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You know I love this sufi master, Hafiz and his quotes are so true and you have written so beautifully, Meenakshi. A wonderful poem on Sacred Love. Too good.
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Thank You so much Kamal! You are always kind in your comments! 🙂
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Thanks dear
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Awesome post 🙂
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Thank You Samantha!
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The metaphor of love between earth and sun is beautiful. You’re an amazing poet yourself! 🙂
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Not as amazing as you are! I fell in love with your poetry! Thanks once again!
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And I loved yours. It’s a perfect exchange 😉
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Love this.
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Thank You!
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