Pungent#Daily Prompt#Attempt 9
Is there any way to
Empty this vessel of my soul
Overflowing with emotions
Suffocating with desires
Treated with disrespect
Tortured and abandoned
Burnt and hurt
With Pungent words
I want to empty it
As I wish to go back home
Only with my clean and pure soul!
Lovely!
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Thank You!
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Loved it!
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Thank You Sakshi!
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You’re welcome!
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Powerful dear Meenakshi! “As I wish to go home only with my pure soul”… loved that lineπ
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Ahh! I love one thing about your way of compliment that you give it very honestly! That line is my favourite too… π
Thank You Divya! π
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π So beautiful!
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Thank You Pragal!
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lovely poem… cheers
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Thank you so much!
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Whenever we try to empty it, there will be something more ready to get in….
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True Akhila, so we need to learn with all this…till we free ourselves…
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Ya..we just need to leave it as such and live
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Beautiful
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Thank You!
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Pleasure
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Awesome!
Me returning home after my abuser went ghost.
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Thanks dear!
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