Curiously he looked at her
With raised brows,
Cold sweat on face
His heartbeat could be heard
From a distance
Her peacefully smiling
Sated face
Told him rest of the tale…
That all is well
In her inner world
The new planted seed
Has taken shape
Without exchange of
Any words
Serenity enveloped them
New chapters of life were waiting
To be written…
And they were happily ready
To be born again
This time as parents…
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Sure Saloni!
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Oh my! It is heartwarming & beautiful Meenakshi:)
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Thank You Divya! Just like your new dp!! Very beautiful! π
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Awww thank you π
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Love the reveal at the end! I don’t often see suspense in a poem. Very nice, very heartwarming.
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Even I tried it first time! Thank You for stopping by! π
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I could smell the suspense at the line “Told him the rest of the tale” πππ Beautiful poem. And as always I’m falling short of wordsβ€β€
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Love you Akshita π Thank You so much! βΊ
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I enjoy your poetry.
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Thank You! You are welcome here!
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Lovely poem Meenakshi π
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Thank You Priya! π
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beautiful poem, ma’am
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Thank You so much!
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Beautiful
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Thank You Steve!
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Such a beutifully expressed poem! β€
Wonderful Meenakshiji π
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Thank You Kavita!
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Welcome π
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Oh a stunner Meenakshi as always so beautiful and serene poem. ππππππ
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Thank You! π
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Welcome dear friend.
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born again as parents…very meaningful..
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Thank You Akhila! Everytime a cild is born he or she gives birth to parents as they are the one who helps us experience this unique relation.
I’m glad you noticed this… π
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i liked it very much…
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You have said it all in most decent way..
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Thank you…using my imagination in this one π
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its always fascinating to understand others expressions…
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Wow! This one is another one of your creative best!
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Thanks a lot π
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