Daily prompt#Attempt 1 #Unfinished
Our unfinished story
Those unfinished tasks
Are waiting for completion
But…
Unfinished words
That you never said
Linger in air
I daily hear
From your silence
Imagining the reasons behind
Your unexplained exit
And leaving behind
Unfinished tasks
These matters of hearts…
Heart touching post and if you drew the image, it is wonderful! ” I daily hear from your silence” can describe so many relationships. Thank you for sharing your gifts!
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Than You Rick! Image credit goes to Pinterest! I’m very poor in that field 🙂
I’m greatful for your kind words!!
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This poem speaks volumes, and the art work fits it perfectly. I can relate to your poem. :o)
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Thank You! And can understand you if you can relate…
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Some very touching words Meenakshi!
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Thanks Divya! I was trying to go to your blog from last one week but every time I try it shows no posts… 😦
WP behaves so weired some times!
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Oh really? Thank you so much for notifying me. I truly appreciate it:) I’ll check it out… just posted a new post yesterday…
You’re not able to see any posts is it?
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It is showing unable to retrieve posts
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WordPress is weird sometimes! 🙂 Some technical glitch I guess… I hope it gets corrected soon:) Thanks again for letting me know dear:)
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I will try to open it from my laptop…maybe its not working on ph
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Ah maybe… Thank you so much Meenakshi… you’re truly very kind:)
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You are always welcome dear and it’s my loss that Im unable to reach and enjoy your posts!
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Awww you’re too sweet!
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Quite beautiful
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Thank You!
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Awesome Meenakshi ! So connecting! Happy times!
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Thanks! Have a great sunday!
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Unfinished has a lot to say. However, it has already spoken volumes. A beautiful poem!
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Thank You! Greatful for your nyc words!
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Deep touch…
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Thanks! Deep and unfinished… 🙂
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I was waiting for this one. You write just so good,so deep. I’m short of words. You’re an inspiration for beginners like me.😊
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Thank you so much Akshita! Just stumbled on this prompt last night…and I don’t know how and when I finished up with these lines…
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Incredible:D
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💖
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Very beautifully written, Meenakshi!!
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Thank You so much!
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Wow! And wow again!
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Thank You Kunal!
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The unfinished words though
Have all the quality of the finished ones
Attempting to finish half done
Says it all that it is finished
The image chosen, drawn
By the lines
Makes imagine of the full drawn face.
Meenakshi this is too good Ya!
Love to You,
Shiva
🙂
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Thank You so much Shiva! Yes life is like this always unfinished…work in progress!
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“Work in Progress”
like in India.
Hahaha!
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Haha…
Exactly! 😀
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it can never be finished as there is only one love life…and the void remains as it is..
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Very true Akhila! Void can never be filled…no matter how hard we try
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stay blessed dear
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Brilliant Meenakshi and your poems are becoming better like wine…the sudden exits do lead to unfinished chores..sadly yes..
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Thank you so much! Such a beautiful compliment! Now I would be more self conscious to write well… 🙂
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So nice 🙂
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Thank You Anni 🙂
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Awesome poem so heart touching Meenakshi and the picture was so apt completely unfinished like your poem. It was completely left to us to know our unfinished story. Superb.👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thank You So Much Kamal! You are always kind! 🙂
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You’re always welcome Meenakshi feels so nice when we all give our feedback and appreciate each others work.
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That’s very true! These appreciations are no less than awards!
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Yes absolutely true, have a nice day.
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Absolutely true.
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Amazing! 💖
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Thank You! 🙂
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💞💖
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Tears are rolling my eyes…sad but how apt! Thanks for sharing this song! 💖
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A beautiful write Meena.
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Thank You!
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beautiful poem..most matters of the heart are unfinished…but then, that perhaps, is the charm of life..cheers
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Yea true…Thank You!!
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welcome, ma’am
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Well converted, I love everything about this poem…
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome…
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