So it is declared-
I’m a criminal
My biggest crime is
Being a woman
Second is that
I am married
Still I seek freedom!
And I didn’t stop there
I even have some dreams…
How could I?
When I’m kitchen queen?
No! No! correction here
Not queen
I’m a slave
Still I took the liberty
To weave life
Being an unpaid employee
How dare I?
Attempt one more crime?
My job is to
Keep everyone happy
Though they will
Always find a way
To make me feel guilty
How could I deny?
That I have not done
The crime?
Since I’m accused of
Coping well with smiles
Although its a luxury
To which I have no right!
Being happy while
Living a miserable life
Is my next crime!
How can I outshine?
So being a criminal
It’s my punishment
To suffer till
Last day of my life!
As there is no escape
From this jail
I am Trapped!
And no one can
Give my bail.
P.S.-Not every poem of mine is my own story! Sometimes they are inspired by situations around me.
Correct.
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powerful
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Thank You Tony! Powerful story of a powerful woman, who can’t use her power!
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We feel,then write by inspiration.👍☺
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Yes! Thanks for understanding! 🙂
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Welcome dear☺
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You are bang on…very effective in placing your views…nice work..
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Thank You!
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This is WOW!! very well expressed!!
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Thank you!!
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Yeah, that’s what we all say darling!
Just funning you…
chris
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Its ok Chris…my readers are free to interpret 🙂
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i had never looked at it, or thought of it in that way!
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Chill I wrote it in light way! Smile 🙂
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Glad to know it is not your story…….but unfortunately quite a few women share this story and you gave your beautiful words to depict their plight.
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Our male dominated society, treats women like a slave, property or a display thing who don’t have the freedom to express themselves and its really a very unfortunate and shameful way to behave towards one who are in no means less than them!
Thank you Radhika for your views!
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So true in so many situations. Very powerful and beautiful expression. Thank you!
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Thank you!
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depicted the life of thousands of women
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Unfortunately 😦
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😦
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Meenakshi, you have just spoken the hearts of a million women in India that are trapped by the guilt trips they are sent on for not conforming to the society’s norms.
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And its high time this mental abuse or trauma should be stopped! Thank you for reading and stopping by!
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Each one of us trapped in life some times in pleasure other time in pain.
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Very true!
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we keep on looking for trap of our choice in terms of desires…is it not true meenakshi?
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From one trap to another…sinetimes trapped in our thoughts, desires, in relations and even in our freedom we are trapped!
Yea this is also true! 👍
But some traps are deadly than others!
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Hmm yes when we have no clue how to come out of them or the depends on the how much we dislike the trap …
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Not just one or two there are many factors which force us to bind ourselves to that trap…even when we dislike it! This is how our society is framed.
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Can’t agree more . We have been conditioned in a way . Then suggest some solution to it…
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I can’t come out of this trap true!
But who said
I will stop living dude?
I will paint dreams
On campus of my soul
And will achieve
My new set goals
You can trap me, but
No! You can’t stop
My growth…
Can never stop
My growth
As I’m
Not fire of gas stove
I’m burning desire like sun
Which can give light to
Your whole globe!!
Never underestimate
Power of even
Trapped woman 🙂
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This is beautiful positive side with in you. you have come up with right analogy of sun and stove.
you are having burning desires for growth get going.
Agreed.
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Thank You! You made me look at this side with your last comment! Thanks once again 🙂
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pleasure is all mine its always good to spent time with you…
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Thanks for the P.S. cos I was initially thinking this was about you.
Nice and strong
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Thanks! 🙂
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Uwc
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Pain of a woman pain of being woman
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Yes! Thanks for visiting!
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Love the power in this!
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Thank You!
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Not your story but sadly it was mine. Your words, your pen powerful & beautiful expressions of an abused wife’s life (mine).
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I’m really sorry for you but read its second part and live your life with smiles! A big hug and love to you!!
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Thank you!❤
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I enjoyed you work. Thank you for sharing. Brick
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Thank You so much Brick! Keep visiting!
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