We both are same in our pain
Killing each other in this hatred game
So are tears that our families shed
Since colour of blood is always red
Loss of loved one here or there
Is always same no matter where
As we are always same in our pain!
We descended on earth in form of humans
Then entered ego of being man or woman
Then we divided ourselves in boundaries of nations
This way we grew many useless tensions
And started wars to win the game
Forgetting that we are same in pain!
Stop! Says God-you maddening heads!
End this game of bloody blood sheds
You keep on searching peace and light!
While walking on path of endless fights?
And then you play this game of blame
Remember you are same in pain!
Life is life whether yours or mine
When it ends before its time
Cries of loved ones tears walls of sky
Earth too weeps when humanity dies!
Stop shedding blood on country’s name
When soul leaves body it is same in pain!
Stop it! End this! Pleads the life!
Mothers, sisters and dying soldier’s wives!
Still are waiting for their return to home
Please don’t break their trust and hopes
Don’t kill since you have to win this game
Since no one deserves to bear this pain!
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Superb! Fantastic flow and rhyme.
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Thank You!
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A poem with such a profound message Meenakshi. We define ourselves with boundaries forgetting that humanity and pain is universal. Very well written dear!
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Thank You Radhika!! I wish this message could reach every human heart!
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Pain is pain no matter who is afflicted , the light of love.. universality of it can dispel this darkness! Lovely poem Meenakshi.
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Thank You so much! I pray this darkness could end giving birth to a new light…
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Exceptional! Stop this foolishness… For we are one!
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Yes as a universal soul we all are one! Thank you so much!
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Your welcome my friend… And I love your work by the way. I hope you have a good day or night.
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Thank You! You too enjoy yours!
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Thanks
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You have written it so beautifully.. I am weeping
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Your tears shows the beauty of your soul! I am glad I am able to deliver the message!
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Awesome
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Thank You!
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Wow Meenakshi what an inspiring poem. Too good. 👍 👍
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Thank you Kamal! I hope it inspire those who need it most!
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Yes so true. 👍 👍
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This is beautiful and emotional. So deep. It’s wonderful
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Thank You so much! Wishing you love and peace!
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You’re welcome. Wishing you all the happiness in the world😀
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This was very captivating. The win can definitely happen without the blood. Nice message over there.. 🙂
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Thank you! Yea definetely there is no need for blood shed, peace could be answer to everything!
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True! 🙂 Pleasure..
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Deep and disturbing 😦
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Thank You! I know it is disturbing…the whole war thing is…
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Yeah
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Bravo!
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry Meenakshi. It touches the minds of those who want peace, but then will all take heed to this, those who fight wars in the name of peace, will this ever end?
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Thank You Sunith! Yes very appropriate question, will this ever end?…I could never understand how one human can end life of other? Pathetic!!
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Indeed, you have written it well, I wouldn’t express it myself any better… Humans are just silly primats who love to be at war and in pain, sadly
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Thank You for your insight! Yes it is a way too sad
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very welcome
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What a treasure to share. Thanks for your visit. Hope to see you again. 🙂
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Thank You! For sure!
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