And then you entered
In my life…
Changing its
Whole design…
You changed
My direction
Slowly but
With perfection
And I was no more me
I lost my own ownership
Then you declared
You can never be mine
I even accepted this
And was doing fine
One day like a storm
You left my life,
Now I’m shattered, scattered
And no more alive…
There is a big vacuum now
Where used to be life
With faith in my heart
And hope in my eyes
I will wait for you
To come one last time…
I love this. This is a real good poem, wow. Keep up the good poetry👍
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Thank You for appreciating! 🙂
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You have a lovely blog. thank you for following mine 🙂
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Thank You Arlene! I found your honest and nyc! 🙂
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A powerful write and everyone can relate to these feelings. Well done
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I’m glad you like it! Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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Heartbreaking, in the most beautiful way. Keep up the good work. 😁
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Thank You Tanya! Heartbreaking with hope… 🙂
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Hope never ends and you portrayed that beautifully
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Thank you! Yes we are alive on that one hope…
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Beautiful ! 🙂
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Thank you Josh!
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Amazing.
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Thank you Kamal!
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Hurry-up an wait,
nicely written…
i also see the you dropped in for a read,
thank you,
chris
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Thank you Chris! Your poems are Intense! Loved reading it!
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Thank you!
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beautiful
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Thank You Daisy!
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How do you do this? Haha. Great poem, I love it.
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Thank you! I don’t do anything, words just flow out 🙂
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Words are moist with tears! Well written.
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Thank You!
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Wow. This could be about a death of a loved one, a break-up, a death of a pet or just pain in general. Deep stuff.
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Or death of a relation…Thank You Vinny!
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true. I forgot about that one. thanks for sharing you imagination .
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Loved the way you described it Vinny! Keep visiting!
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Thank you. I wont be a stranger, I promise.
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💖
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Very very ❤ touching poem but for some reason last two lines made me sad… very well written
Following u*
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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